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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Tue Apr 28, 2009 10:00 pm

Tis aawesome like I said on the other Forums.

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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:28 am

Yupyup Very Happy Razz king
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Wed Apr 29, 2009 9:07 pm

Thanks a lot, guys. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:18 pm

Okay, I'll be posting the last chapter of the season on Saturday or maybe Sunday. I'll be posting it on both the FF forums and here 30 minutes to a hour later. After that, I won't posting more chapters for a while.
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PostSubject: Sneak Peek   Fri May 01, 2009 8:09 pm

Here's a sneak peek at what will happen in the next chapter. Oh, and just so you know if you've read this story on the FF forums, this sneak peek is a little different, so think of it as a bonus.

When I arrived at the junkyard, I saw terrafuser pods almost everywhere as I looked for the head. I better find it, and fast. I looked everywhere, but it looked like it was nowhere to be found. Just then, I saw something running with something in its mouth. When I took a closer look at it, I saw that it had the head, mistaking it for a chew toy. It was heading towards what at first I thought was a tower, so I followed it, being careful not to get caught. When it stopped to rest for a while, I pulled out my pistol and carefully aimed at the beast's chest so as to not hit the head. Just got one shot before he notices me. Gotta make it count. I fired and shot the beast down with one blast. But before he went down, he howled loudly. A few seconds later, more of them showed up, along with some Spawns with gas masks. Suddenly, everything started to stink. No wonder they wear gas masks. They reek! I reached for the sword I had, but I suddenly remembered what happened to it. Oh right! Fusion Eduardo broke it in the last battle. I forgot about that. Oh well. Better stick with the pistol.

That's all I'm revealing before the story.
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Fri May 01, 2009 9:58 pm

Coming soon:
The Season Finale of FalconKnight's Journey
Chapter 6: Escape to the Past, Part Two
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 12:45 am

Cool, just read all the chapters. I can't wait until the season finale!
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 2:19 pm

Thanks. You must be new here. You can call me Jet.
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 3:51 pm

Okay, so are you guys ready for the season finale, cause its coming out sometime today!!! cheers Cool
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 4:01 pm

WOOHOO!!! cheers bounce king
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 5:45 pm

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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 9:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 9:09 pm

Okay, just posted it on the FF forums. Now I'm going to post it here. Just give me a few minutes and I'll have it up.


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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 9:11 pm

Cool! Sorry I haven't been on FF Forums this weekend. I have no lappy till Monday v_v

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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 9:34 pm

Okay guys, here it is. The Season Finale!
Chapter 6: Escape to the Past, Part Two

"I can't believe this. The whole world is ending as we know it, and there's nothing we can do to stop it." "Snap out of it, Chris,"I said to my friend, "There still a chance we stop this." "You've got to be kidding me. We can't destroy all those terrafusers in time. There's no hope left for us." "There's still one thing we can do."I nodded. "You've got to be joking, Adam. We don't even know what to find so we can fix it." "On the contrary," Dexter interrupted, "We know exactly what you need. Mandark has just finished analyzing the time machine and found that it requires a time vortex and the head of Larry 3000 for it to work." "okay, then. So we already know how to find the vortex," I said, looking at the Temporal Stone, "but what about the head? Last I heard, It disappeared after Larry was destroyed when we were fighting in Tech Square. "Mandark has already found the location of the head. It's in Goats Junkyard. "I'll go and find the vortex. You can get the head."Chris said. "Okay, but take the stone with you," I answered while giving him the Temporal Stone, "You'll need it to locate the vortex. We'll meet back at the tree house after we've found the items." "We'll do everything we can to buy you two some time," Dexter said, "But you'll have to hurry. Time is not on our side." Ending the call, we both separated and went to find the last two parts for the time machine.

When I arrived at the junkyard, I saw terrafuser pods almost everywhere as I looked for the head. I better find it, and fast. I looked everywhere, but it looked like it was nowhere to be found. Just then, I saw something running with something in its mouth. When I took a closer look at it, I saw that it had the head, mistaking it for a chew toy. It was heading towards what at first I thought was a tower, so I followed it, being careful not to get caught. When it stopped to rest for a while, I pulled out my pistol and carefully aimed at the beast's chest so as to not hit the head. Just got one shot before he notices me. Gotta make it count. I fired and shot the beast down with one blast. But before he went down, he howled loudly. A few seconds later, more of them showed up right behind me, along with 3 Spawns with gas masks. Suddenly, everything started to stink. No wonder they wear gas masks. They reek! I reached for the sword I had, but I suddenly remembered what happened to it. Oh right! Fusion Eduardo broke it in the last battle. I forgot about that. Oh well. Better stick with the pistol.

I fired multiple shots at the beasts and destroyed them first. When the trio of Spawns was left, they shot globs of green goop at me from their bodies. At first, I thought it wasn't much of a threat, but when it hit my arm, it burned and I felt pain after it struck me. Ugh! This goop! It burns like nothing I've ever felt before. It be made of FM. Now I know why Numbuh 2 said not to touch it. It felt like the FM was eating through my arm while it was on it. I kept shooting at them with my good arm while dodging the globs they were firing. A few minutes later, I finally managed to destroy the last of them. "That takes care of them. Now to get the head. I hope it wasn't too damaged from that battle." I ran over to where the head was to pick it up. I took a through look at it and saw that it was still functional. Looks like it can still work. I better head back to the tree house right away.

As I was looking for the exit, I suddenly fell onto the ground when a loud quake came out of nowhere. I then noticed that the ground was gushing out FM. Oh, great. The pods are activating. I gotta get out of here, and fast. I dashed with the head in my hands, trying to outrun the FM ocean that was forming. Oh, man. Why now? "Hey, Adam, over here!"somebody said suddenly from behind. When I looked back, I saw Bubbles flying low to the ground and was right next to me. "How did you find me?"I asked. "Never mind that." She then extended her hands toward me. "Grab my hands and hold on tight, quickly!" I grabbed them and she pulled me into the sky. As we left, the junkyard sank and went into the ocean along with the other parts of this world. Phew, that was close. That stuff was like acid when it touched me. I can still feel the burn on my arm.

While we were heading towards Sector V, she explained what was happening as we speak and how Chris was doing. "So he already got the portal. That's good news, Bubbles. Now I can go back to the past with my friends." "I still have one question, though before I go back to my time. I remember that before I left, you didn't have any feelings for me, yet now you do. Why is that?" I did have feelings for you, but I was too shy to tell you personally, so I kept it a secret," she answered, blushing as she spoke, "But when I heard that the experiment went wrong, I regretted not telling you how I felt." So she had feelings for me all this time, and I didn't even notice it. I even blushed thinking about this on the way back. When we arrived at the tree house, Chris was already waiting with the vortex, which he had sealed with some kind of special see-through box. "Well, this is where we part for now, Bubbles. I'll see you again in the past, though." We shared one last kiss before she left.

Me and Chris hurried to the lab with the items we found. When we entered the room, Dexter, Sarah, and Michael were waiting for us. Michael was still unconscious and was hanging on Sarah's shoulder, but it looks like he's okay now, so at least we're all going back still. "Good. You're here," Dexter said, "Did you get the items?" We showed him the head and the contained vortex. "Okay, now, put those over there and let's finish this project." We put the items in the spots Dexter wanted us to put them. "I hope this works"I said as Dexter pulled the lever. The machine powered on and a portal appeared. "It is a success."Dexter said in relief. "It actually works," I said in amazement, "Now we can go home." "Sarah and Chris, take Michael through the portal first, then you two go in next," said Dexter, "I have also got crates for each of you to take with you, courtesy of all of us here in the future. I think you'll like what's inside them. Mandark has already sent messages to your friends in the past, so they'll know you're coming back." "Thanks, Dexter. We really appreciate it."said Sarah. She grabbed Michael and put him on her shoulder, while Chris took the three crates and went through the portal first. "Aren't you coming along, Adam?"She asked before going through with Michael. "I'll just be a while, okay? Go on. I won't be far behind." She then went through the portal while carrying Michael on her shoulder.

Just then, after she left through the portal, the room started to shake and an explosion was heard from far away. "What was that?!"I said. Just then, my nanocom rang. I pulled it out to see who's calling. "Max, this is Numbuh Two. If you can hear me, you have to get to the past quickly. Fuse has launched an sneak attack on the tree house. He's already broken through our shields. You have to get out of there quick, before-" Just then, the call was suddenly cut off. "Get out of there before what? Numbuh 2, can you hear me? Numbuh 2!" There was no response coming from the other end. I have a bad feeling about this. Just then, Bubbles just came through a wall and landed on the floor, bleeding and seriously wounded. "Bubbles!" I ran over to her and saw that she was dying. "Max," Bubbles spoke weakly while struggling to get up, "Please. Get out of here before...before." She then closed her eyes and fell to the floor. "Bubbles! Get up! Please! Don't go!" But even I saw that it was too late. She was already dead. Tears went down my face as I mourned her death. "That poor little girl," said someone from behind, "but she should known better than to mess with Fuse, ruler of Planet Fusion." I looked back and saw a dark figure wearing a coat. "YOU WERE THE ONE WHO KILLED HER! I'LL MAKE YOU SUFFER FOR THAT!" I took out my pistol and fired right at Fuse's heart, but then, tentacles sprung from his back and blocked my lasers. The tentacles then grabbed me and threw me at the wall with such force that when I collided with it, it hurt so much that I could barely move when I fell to the floor.

"Pathetic human. Did you really think you could defeat me? Your allys are all dead, and you two will be joining them very soon," spoke Fuse with a evil grin across his face as he walked toward me, "And I think I'll start with you first." I struggled to move my body and get away, but I was too wounded to even stand up. Come on! Got....to....get...away. If I don't, then I really will die. "Say good bye, hero." Fuse then stretched his tentacles at me to deliver the finishing blow. I blinked and thought that it was the end for me. Just then, Dexter blocked it with his wrench and was holding back the tentacles. "Go now! Our future is doomed anyway. You can't do anymore to help here. You have to get back to the past and fix this," Dexter said as he struggled to hold back Fuse's tentacles, "Now get through the portal, and quick! I can't hold him back much longer!"

I struggled with my body and barely managed to stand. I then went over to my crate and carried it over to the portal. I ran at it full speed and jumped through it, not even looking back. Thanks for the help, Dexter. I won't let you down. The portal was like a long tunnel while I was in it. when I got out the other end, I fell from where the other end was, which was a few feet above the ground, and fell to the floor, face first. And then the crate I was carrying fell on my back, which increased the pain I felt now. "Oww...Remind me not to do that again."I said as I got up. When I looked around, I saw that we were in Tech Square, except without the ocean of FM covering it, and when I looked up at the sky, I didn't see Planet Fusion anywhere. "Hey guys," I shouted to the group, "I think we're home." "I think you're right,"Sarah said in awe, "we are home." As we were talking, a group of people came out of nowhere and suprised us. "Welcome back, guys!"shouted Ben. "We're glad you've made it home safely."said Numbuh 2. Then Bubbles came up and hugged me suddenly, and from the look on her face, it looked like she was crying. "When I had heard what had happened, I thought you were gone forever." Just then, she suddenly let go and moved back a bit, blushing red. I didn't mind this, since I already knew about her secret, but I didn't want to tell her. At least not yet anyway, so I kept quiet about it for now.

But still, I can't help but wonder about something. When I faced up against Fuse, he knocked back my attacks like it was nothing. He also almost killed me with his tentacles. I don't know how I'm going to deal with that later on. But, even though I know that Fuse is coming, I just want this day to last. I'm finally home, and it feels great to be back.
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 9:43 pm

Very Happy AWESOME I already said this on the ff forums
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 9:50 pm

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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 9:58 pm

Thanks, guys. It felt great to write this story.
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 10:04 pm

It always feels great writing these stories Smile Especially if they're good like yours Smile
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 10:12 pm

Wow, that was a good compliment. Thanks. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 10:14 pm

Well, I got to go to sleep now. We'll talk more about this tomorrow.
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sat May 02, 2009 10:14 pm

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PostSubject: Season 2 Plans   Sun May 03, 2009 9:16 am

I'm already planning out the next season. It might take a while before I get it all organized and release the first chapter of that season, though. You can ask questions or make predictions about what will happen in the next season, if you guys want. I might even have some room to add other people in it. study


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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sun May 03, 2009 2:08 pm

Is it me or does everything seem quiet in this site today? :silent: Neutral
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PostSubject: Re: FalconKnight's Journey   Sun May 03, 2009 2:14 pm

I know it's weird and boring Sleep
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