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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyWed Apr 29, 2009 5:00 pm

It means laugh my ass off.
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyWed Apr 29, 2009 5:06 pm

O ok Shocked king lol! lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptySat May 02, 2009 6:31 pm

Sad Only Green has responded to the 2nd part

Also Part 3: Heroes and Fusions will be out most likely tomorrow Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptySat May 02, 2009 6:39 pm

Just looked at it. It was pretty good, to say the least. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptySat May 02, 2009 6:54 pm

Thanx Smile

PS The story has hardly begun i havent even put any action in Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyMon May 04, 2009 4:32 pm

Sorry about the delay on the next part but it should be out today
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyMon May 04, 2009 5:16 pm

Nice Story


*cough*Check out mine *cough*
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyMon May 04, 2009 5:45 pm

Thanx and sure but is it here or only on FF forums?
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyMon May 04, 2009 6:34 pm

His story's on both. Trust me, I've checked.
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyMon May 04, 2009 6:39 pm

O OK Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyMon May 04, 2009 9:00 pm

Next part
Part 3: Heroes and Fusions


“It wasn’t me! It was Blossom!” Numbuh 2 said. Then Cookie, Autumn and Cam got off the SCAMPER and right next to the SCAMPER was an orange, long haired girl with a big red bow on it and matching red shirt. They also noticed that she could fly.

“Whoa! Blossom is that you?!?” Autumn said in shock.

“Yea, you never knew that I had superpowers?!?” Blossom said back.

“Well u never used them in school” Cookie said.

“Yea but don’t you remember back in Pre-K when My sisters and I use to save Townsville?” Blossom said back.

“Sorry but apparently there are tons of things that we have forgotten” Cookie answered.

Then Numbuh 2 called to them “Cookie! Autumn! Come up I have some stuff to give you!” Cookie and Autumn went up to the tree house that was floating up in the sky while Cam stayed with Blossom.

“We’re here! What’s wrong?” Autumn asked.

“Other geniuses and I have just created specialized armor that can help defend you from the aliens’ attacks” Numbuh 2 said as he showed them two full sets of clothes that looked totally normal. “They may not look special but believe me they are. They have state-of-the art tech that keeps out the FM from the aliens without weighing you down” He said as he smiled proud of his invention. Then all of a sudden something began to ring. Cookie and Autumn checked their cell phones to see if that was it but it was not. Then they asked Numbuh 2 if it was his and he answered “No, It’s your nanocom” Numbuh 2 told them. Cookie and Autumn answered their nanocoms. It was Blossom to tell them that Cam went off to the high school because a terrafuser flew straight at it. Cookie and Autumn put on their new clothes and ran off to their school.



“Wow! I never thought I’d come running to school on summer vacation” Cookie said as they went into the high school.

Once they got in Dex called them from their nanocoms “Cookie! Autumn! Samurai Jack has just informed me that Fuse has just sent a huge army of fusions out from Planet Fuse! You must be careful he may send some fusions your way!”

Then Blossom called “Guys wait there I’ll meet up with you!” Within seconds Blossom was with them. They went into the completely deserted school and made their way through the front door before a green comet came rushing towards them. Blossom used her ice breath and then heat vision to try and stop it but it still came straight in to the school. “Watch out!” Blossom yelled as she grabbed Cookie and Autumn and flew them to safety. They managed to get out of the school without getting hurt.

“Do not worry I will have the SACT there within moments and they shall seal off the infection with my new Dexlabs force fields” Dexter said. In a few minutes men in black showed up with pods and set them up around the school after a few more terrafusers landed in the school.

“WAIT!!! What about Cam?!?” Autumn screamed as the SACT activated the pods.

“Don’t worry! Dexter has also sent transportation unit so we may go into the infected zone” one of the SACT members explained. But just then another terrafuser landed into the high school and Autumn rushed into the IZ with Cookie following close behind. Once inside Autumn rushed straight for the front door of the high school. She got in and saw Cam trapped behind some green globs with red eyes and big mouths. Blossom came in and handed each Cookie a sword and Autumn a gun while she went with her powers. Together they fought their way towards Cam but before they could get to him the terrafuser sent out some more blobs that attacked Blossom. Blossom fought them off but once they got off another terrafuser landed and the globs jumped into it. Then the terrafuser began to mold itself into the shape of a body.

“Watch out! It’s a fusion!” Blossom yelled as she blasted the green body of FM that was starting to settle into its new form. In the end it looked like Blossom but at the same time it didn’t. Its skin was a light-ish green and hair was a very dark green and its clothes were the same colors as Blossom’s. The new Fusion Blossom began to ice breath Cookie and Autumn and Blossom began to ice breath her. “Bubbles I need back up!” Blossom said into a communicator she said. In a few seconds A girl with blond pigtails came in through the entrance and shout a powerful screech at Fusion Blossom. Fusion Blossom froze Cam as he went towards Cookie and Autumn and flew off with him. “She got away! But she’ll be back! She can’t go too far away from this terrafuser” Blossom said.

“Why’s that?” Cookie asked.

“More importantly how are we going to save Cam?!?” Autumn yelled and asked.

“We’ll try the best we can to save Cam but I don’t know if we’ll be able to! For all I know they could be sending him off to the Planet Fusion” Blossom answered.

“No! It can’t be!” Autumn said as she began to cry. Cookie got her and left the school before they were caved in. They got back to the tree house and began to plan what to do to get Cam back and find Fusion Blossom.

“I’ll go Downtown and search for her down there” Bubbles suggested.

“Numbuh 4 and I can check in the Wilds” a Korean (I think) girl with green extra long sleeved shirt suggested.

“Ok Bubbles you go Downtown! Numbuh 3 and 4 go to the Wilds and I’ll stay here in case she comes back” Blossom told the group.
I cut it a lil short sorry
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyMon May 04, 2009 9:07 pm

Sweetness!
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyMon May 04, 2009 9:21 pm

Awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyTue May 05, 2009 6:49 am

Very Happy Thanx guys next is chapter 2 wont be out til like saturday Sorry but i've got other stuff to do Sad
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyThu May 14, 2009 5:50 pm

Sorry for the delay but i've had homework and now i have like to or 3 projects due next week so yea its been pretty hard keepin up wit school work lately cuz i feel like just leavin for summer already

ANYWAY i'm changing the story to first person which is Cookie's view Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyThu May 14, 2009 7:02 pm

Anyone got a better i dea for the title of this story cuz i need a better one and in a few minutes i';m gonna add Chapter one REWRITTEN

It's a little diferent but not much just first person point of view (Cookie's view) and i added tiny details
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyThu May 14, 2009 11:30 pm

You can edit your posts you know...
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptyFri May 15, 2009 3:21 pm

O well it'll just be easier if they were all on the same oage instead of partt 1 on page 1 then # 2 on page 2 and finaly #3 on 3
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptySat May 16, 2009 8:20 am

Idk how to post pics but here Cookie and Autumn

Sad I cant cuz idk how to post directly from paint Sad
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptySat May 16, 2009 12:22 pm

You can't, you have to have an [IMG] link.
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptySun May 24, 2009 1:55 pm

Here's a pic of Cookie and Autumn

Pic of Cookie and Autumn
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Cookie and Autumn 2nd story - Page 2 EmptySat May 30, 2009 10:47 pm

Wow this is fallin down to the bottom when there's hardly any bottom Neutral

Anyway i revised chapter 1 and made it first person so heres part 1 2 and 3 I also made a new tital Smile Hope u like it
Birth of the Titans



Chapter 1: The War Begins
Part 1: The Concert


“C’mon Autumn the party’s this way” I said.

“I know Cookie, I’m coming” she answered. Today was the last day of our freshman year at Pokey Oaks.

“Finally the end of the year dance!” one of the kids said excited for the party. The kids at Pokey Oaks had a great time and partied for hours.

“That was a great party” I said exhausted from the games, dancing, and playing around.

“Yup! Well now we have to walk ALL the way home” Autumn said.

“No, you don’t have to” a voice said “Why can’t your parents pick you up?”

“O hey Cam” I said “Autumn look it’s your boyfriend” I whispered in Autumn’s ear teasing her.

“Shut up!” she whispered back “Don’t worry Cam we can walk home it’s just that our parents are working all the way Downtown at Steam Alley”

“Well I can drive you home” Cam answered “I just got my driver’s license and my own car”

“Sure!” Autumn answered right away.

“Ok apparently my sister wants to go with you” I said as I pushed Autumn towards Cam. Then Autumn started to blush when she looked and she was accidently kissing Cam. Then she pulled her hoodie over her head and ran to the back of the car. Cam began to blush a little and I got in the car.

“So… Where do you guys live?” Cam asked.

“We live at Tech Square” I answered as I looked out the window looking at the clouds.

“So… you guys going to the concert tonight at City Center?” Cam asked.

“Yea sure we’ll be there just drops us off home so we can get ready” Autumn answered “We’ll meet you there!” We arrived at our house and Autumn grabbed me and dragged me out.

“How could just push me so that he knows I like him” Autumn told me still embarrassed about what I had done.

“It was just a joke” I answered. Then a flash came from the sky. ”What was that?” I asked as I looked to the sky searching for the green flash.

“Maybe it’s the fireworks for the concert let’s hurry Cam’s probably waiting for us” Autumn said.

“Well you better not keep your boyfriend waiting” I said teasing her again.

“Let’s just go” Autumn said. We got ready and went to the concert with our bike and scooter. We got to City Center and found Cam.

“Hey Cam we’re here” Autumn said the moment she found him.

“Hey Autumn” Cam said “Hey Cookie you guys got here just on time the concert’s just beginning.”

“And now our first act the Beat-Alls!” a kid that was bald with sunglasses announced from the stage who looked vaguely familiar.





“Hey Cookie is it just me or does that kid seem REAL familiar?” Autumn asked.

“Yea he does” I answered searching through my head to see if I could remember him from some moment of my life, but I failed at it as I always did when I tried to remember something. Then a four-man band came out the singer was a girl that had a golden crown with a big jewel in the middle and a shirt that had yellow and black stripes and behind her were a pink looking bigfoot, a devil looking creature with crab hands, and a monkey with a glass jar thing on his head.

“Wow these are some pretty freaky costumes” Cam said.

“Yup” “Ditto” My sister and I answered.

“We Hate’em! We Hate’em!” They repeated over and over again. In about a minute everyone in the concert were singing along with them including Cam, Autumn, and me! Then in the sky the word “The Beat-Alls” appeared in blue, green, and red.

“Cool lights” I said.

“Hey what’s that green light…? It’s getting bigger and closer” Autumn said looking up to the sky.

“Evacuate the stage!!!” Someone said over an intercom.

“Autumn c’mon move!” Cam said as he grabbed her hand. The three of us got up from the stage and looked back.

“I think whatever happened is over” I said as more and more kids ran by and nothing had fallen “Well we might as well get home before our parents get mad or scared about us.”

“Bye Cam” Autumn said.

“Bye Autumn” Cam said and kissed her on the cheek good-bye.

“Autumn c’mon” I said as I pulled Autumn back home.



We got home in a couple of minutes. “Hey Mom, Hey Dad we’re back!” My sister and I said as we entered our home.

“Hhmmm…No answer” I said “You guys here?”

“Maybe they went out for dinner after work” Autumn suggested.

“Well no point in waiting for them if we don’t know when they’re going to get here” I said. We got changed and went to bed.
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Part 2: The Suburbs


“Hey mom what are we having for breakfast?!” I asked as I got up from my bed. There was no answer. “Mom? Dad?” I said “You guys here!” He went up to their room to check. “Man, they went off to work already! Autumn wake up! Me want breakfast!”

“Ugh… You are so lazy, you know that?” Autumn answered.

“C’mooooonnn” I whined.

“Ok, ok, man, you act like a little kid sometimes” Autumn said “Even if you are older by a couple of minutes.”

“I’m gonna see what’s on TV” I said as I grabbed the remote and turned the TV on to the news channel.

“Breaking News” an announcer said “The Suburbs has been invaded by an alien planet, and everyone has had something personal stolen from them.”

“Cookie, breakfast’s ready!” Autumn called.

“Did u know that ‘aliens’ are attacking the planet?” he said as they had breakfast.

“Where?” Autumn asked.

“They said that the aliens are attacking the suburbs” I answered “Maybe we should go visit. We could see that mansion we use to always go to.”

“Yea sure, but what mansion are u talking about?” Autumn answered.

“I remember some mansion that we use to go to all the time. Only thing is I forget what was there or where it is.”

“Ok we’ll go” Autumn answered “Well shouldn’t we call Cam for a ride?”

“Of course the first person you think of is Cam” I answered “But yea sure.” Autumn called Cam and he came over right away.

“So, Autumn, what do u need?” Cam asked.

“Cookie and I decided to visit the suburbs for today” Autumn answered.

“Sure” Cam answered “but did u hear the news about the aliens?”

“Yea that’s why we want to go and to see this mansion that we use to play at” I answered. Cam drove us to City Station.

“What are we doing here?” I asked as I looked up at the tallest tower.

“There’s a SCAMPER up there that can take us to the suburbs” Cam answered pointing up at a tower that I was looking at. We went in and up to where the SCAMPER was.

“U guys got money, right?” Cam asked.

“A little bit, why?” I answered.

“We’re gonna need money to pay the dude to fly us” Cam said. We went and talked to the driver.

“Hey can u fly us to the suburbs? Wait … do I know u???” Autumn asked.

“O my god!!! Numbuh 5 look quick!” The chubby boy that was driving the SCAMPER said.

“Holy cannoli! U guys are alive!” Numbuh 5 said as she hugged my sister and me.

”What do you mean?!?” I asked thinking she was insane.

“O no they must have decommissioned!” Numbuh 5 said astonished at what she was saying.

“What are you talking about?” I asked confused at what was going on.

“Haven’t u seen any people with the letters KND on them? And didn’t they look familiar???” Numbuh 5 asked.

“Well now that you mention it yea” Autumn answered “There was also a kid with sunglasses and red sweater at the concert at City Center last night that looked REAL familiar.”

“That was Numbuh 5’s leader, Numbuh 1” Numbuh 5 said. “Now that you guys are back we should try and get u re-commissioned” Numbuh 2 said.

“Wait! I need Cookie and Autumn back for a moment before they go off to battle” Dex called from the SCAMPER’s communications.



We drove back to Tech Square and went to Dex.

“Hey Dex what’s wrong?” I asked.

“Edd has sent me a prototype of what we are calling the nanocoms. I made copies to give to people that are here to help with the war” Dex said as he gave us each our own blue watch that had various buttons “These will let u keep in touch with any of us such as me, the KND, rangers, etc.. They also have a shrink ray to shrink items that can help u along the way and a map, mission journal, a tube so you can contain Fusion Matter for when you get some, and three pods for some things to be added.”

“What is FM???” I asked thinking it was something Dexter created to fuse stuff together.

“Guys I need help! Quick!”

Then Dex said “Go! Someone will explain along the way.” So they left with many questions unanswered and rushed back to the SCAMPER where Numbuh 2 and Numbuh 5 were.

“What’s wrong?” Autumn asked.

“Fuse is planning an attack on the suburbs in a few days on the suburbs” Numbuh 5 said “So we need the three of u guys to go and defeat as many fusions as u can before they attack and destroy it.”

“Uummm… What are fusions?” Cam asked.

“Fusions are dark twisted versions of us heroes, such as me and Numbuh 5, which are made of one of our personal belongings” Numbuh 2 answered.

“And what is FM???” I asked.

“Wow! You guys are in for a whole new world” Numbuh 5 said “Ok FM is the matter that these creatures are made up of, right now they have only begun to spawn at Sector V but there are still pods everywhere in the suburbs that are beginning to activate and will soon begin to spawn.”

Then Numbuh 2 finished what she was saying “After that we suspect Fuse will send Terrafusers, those are the pods that the FM creatures are coming from, to the wilds and here downtown. So if we want to win this war we’re going to need to save the suburbs before they are destroyed and then you’ll get to save the wilds and here downtown. If you make it that far we may be able to win this war!”

“So you need us to go fight these aliens and hope we live” I said freaked at and thinking that he was going mental.

“Well… yea sorta… but at least you’ll have special armor that can help protect you from the toxic FM” Numbuh 2 added.

“WHOA!!! TOXIC!!!” I yelled in fear.

“Uummm… Yea” Numbuh 2 said.

“You’re not really selling it but anyway what about these nanos I heard about on the news?” I asked as I remembered the nanos they mentioned on the news a few days ago.

“Well nanos are well nano forms of us heroes such as me and Numbuh 2” Numbuh 5 said.

“WAIT I thought that FM was evil and toxic!” I said as I cut off Numbuh 5 mid-sentence.

“They are made up of refined FM that we use to make them and as I was saying they also have powers that may help you on your journey, but right now they have reported that there was only one fusion but they defeated it. But if u heard the news Fuse has stolen many of our stuff which means he is most likely creating more fusions and sending them here as we speak” Numbuh 5 said on one BIG LONG breath.

Then the SCAMPER began to sink down from the sky. “Numbuh 2 what are u doing, u should warn us before u land!” Numbuh 5 said as she balanced herself.

“It’s not me we’ve been hit!” Numbuh 2 said as he tried to land the ship.

After about a minute they landed without anyone getting hurt. “How’d you do that, Numbuh 2?!?” I asked amazed at the fact we didn’t get a scratch on us.
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Part 3: Heroes and Fusions


“It wasn’t me! It was Blossom!” Numbuh 2 said. Then I, Autumn and Cam got off the SCAMPER and right next to the SCAMPER was an orange, long haired girl with a big red bow on it and matching red shirt. They also noticed that she could fly.

“Whoa! Blossom is that you?!?” Autumn said in shock.

“Yea, you never knew that I had superpowers?!?” Blossom said back.

“Well you never used them in school” I said.

“Yea but don’t you remember back in Pre-K when My sisters and I use to save Townsville?” Blossom said back.

“Sorry but apparently there are tons of things that we have forgotten” I answered.

Then Numbuh 2 called to them “Cookie! Autumn! Come up I have some stuff to give you!” Autumn and I went up to the tree house that was floating up in the sky while Cam stayed with Blossom.

“We’re here! What’s wrong?” Autumn asked.

“Other geniuses and I have just created specialized armor that can help defend you from the aliens’ attacks” Numbuh 2 said as he showed them two full sets of clothes that looked totally normal. “They may not look special but believe me they are. They have state-of-the art tech that keeps out the FM from the aliens without weighing you down” He said as he smiled proud of his invention. Then all of a sudden something began to ring. My sister and I checked their cell phones to see if that was it but it was not. Then they asked Numbuh 2 if it was his and he answered “No, It’s your nanocom” Numbuh 2 told us. I and Autumn answered their nanocoms. It was Blossom to tell us that Cam went off to the high school because a terrafuser flew straight at it. Autumn and I put on our new clothes and ran off to our school.



“Wow! I never thought I’d come running to school on summer vacation” I said as we went into the high school.

Once we got in Dex called us from their nanocoms “Cookie! Autumn! Samurai Jack has just informed me that Fuse has just sent a huge army of fusions out from Planet Fuse! You must be careful he may send some fusions your way!”

Then Blossom called “Guys wait there I’ll meet up with you!” Within seconds Blossom was with us in front of the entrance. We went into the completely deserted school and made our way through the front door before a green comet came rushing towards us. Blossom used her ice breath and then heat vision to try and stop it but it still came straight into the school. “Watch out!” Blossom yelled as she grabbed Autumn and me and flew us to safety. We managed to get out of the school without getting hurt.

“Do not worry I will have the SACT there within moments and they shall seal off the infection with my new Dexlabs force fields” Dexter said. In a few minutes men in black showed up with pods and set them up around the school after a few more terrafusers landed in the school.

“WAIT!!! What about Cam?!?” Autumn screamed as the SACT activated the pods.

“Don’t worry! Dexter has also sent transportation unit so we may go into the infected zone” one of the SACT members explained. But just then another terrafuser landed into the high school and Autumn rushed into the IZ with me following close behind. Once inside Autumn rushed straight for the front door of the high school. She got in and saw Cam trapped behind some green globs with red eyes and big mouths. Blossom came in and handed me a sword, that was blue and thick, and Autumn a gun, that was red and looked like it contained hot sauce, while she went with her powers. Together we fought our way towards Cam but before we could get to him the terrafuser sent out some more blobs that attacked Blossom. Blossom fought them off but once they got off another terrafuser landed and the globs jumped into it. Then the terrafuser began to mold itself into the shape of a body.

“Watch out! It’s a fusion!” Blossom yelled as she blasted the green body of FM that was starting to settle into its new form. In the end it looked like Blossom but at the same time it didn’t. Its skin was a light green with air bubbles inside and hair was a very dark green and its clothes were the same as Blossom’s but in green shade. The new Fusion Blossom began to use its ice breath on my sister and me and Blossom began to use her ice breath on her fusion. “Bubbles I need back up!” Blossom said into a communicator she had. In a few seconds a girl with blond pigtails came in through the entrance and screamed a powerful screech at Fusion Blossom. Fusion Blossom froze Cam as he went towards my sister and me and flew off with him. “She got away! But she’ll be back! She can’t go too far away from this terrafuser” Blossom said.

“Why’s that?” I asked.

“More importantly what’s the plan to save Cam from Fusion Blossom?!?” Autumn yelled and asked at the same time I could tell she was sad inside.

“We’ll try the best we can to save Cam but I don’t know if we’ll be able to! For all I know they could be sending him off to the Planet Fusion” Blossom answered.

“No! It can’t be!” Autumn said as she began to cry. I got her and left the school with her before we were caved in. We got back to the tree house and began to plan what to do to get Cam back and find Fusion Blossom.

“I’ll go Downtown and search for her down there” Bubbles suggested.

“Numbuh 4 and I can check in the Wilds” a Korean, or at least to me she seemed Korean, girl with green extra long sleeved shirt suggested.

“Ok Bubbles you go Downtown! Cookie and Autumn will go to you after they are done here. Numbuh 3 and 4 go to the Wilds and I’ll stay here in case she comes back” Blossom told us.



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Since its been a while since i posted anything new i've decided to post what i've got done so far
Chapter 2: The Chase
Part 1: The Recomissioning


As soon as Blossom gave out the orders everyone followed them. So Bubbles flew off south with her blue trail of light following her to go downtown and Numbuh 3 and 4 flew a SCAMPER off north towards the wilds. We stayed with Blossom and Numbuh 2 in the suburbs. “So what should we do first?” I asked eager to start saving the world. Then Numbuh 2 went into the house that had the humongous tree growing out of it and told us to come with him.

“First we’re going to give you back your memories of the KND” Numbuh 2 told us. I was confused and when I looked my sister it seemed like she was too. Numbuh 2 led us into a room and sat us down. He told us that it wasn’t going to hurt at all and put a helmet on our head which was connected to a big machine. When he put it on I began to freak out but after the first minute while he was getting it ready I calmed down. “Ok I’m starting the machine now” Numbuh told us from the other side a see-through window. He started the machine and it began to light up and then I felt a slight shock on my head. I closed eyes and saw one memory. I saw Autumn and me inside this tree house when it was still on the ground and we were in a line behind Nigel Uno, Hoagie P. Gilligan, Kuki Sanban, Wally Beatles, and Abby Lincoln waiting to pick our numbers as Junior operatives for the KND. The memory ended and I opened my eyes and looked to my sister and saw her smiling I guess she was remembering her getting her medal as a Jr. KND. Then something happened that made the entire tree house shake. We both opened our eyes to see what was going on. “A terrafuser has just hit the tree house! All power is off take off the helmets quick!” Numbuh 2 yelled at us from the other room. We both looked at each other and took off our helmets as quick as we could. We got out of the house and into the front lawn, which was still in the sky, and looked up to see if the tree house had gotten infected.

Luckily, the tree house didn’t get hit, but the satellite at the top of the tree house did get cracked so Numbuh 2 had to fix it. He told my sister and me to search for the terrafuser that landed and said that he would send back up for us if we didn’t come back in a while. We went past the school and finally ended up where the terrafuser had landed. I saw a huge glob of FM come out from the terrafuser and saw it form into the shape of an alien creature that seemed to be made from diamonds. Why does he seem familiar, I thought to myself and then a memory came into my head and I saw me and my sister in 5th grade in class and I remembered two of the kid’s names, Ben and Gwen, and how Ben used to turn into the alien that was in front of me. I finally came back from my memory and noticed that the alien was getting out a communicator so I grabbed my sister and hid behind the closest building around.

”I have landed on Earth, my lord” said the Fusion Diamondhead to his master over the communicator.

“Good, Demongo and Jack have already landed on different areas than you, but Fusion Jack is having some trouble. He says that Samurai Jack has found him and so has someone else. Do not worry about him I have sent two more Fusions to help him. You just remember your mission!” A dark deep voice said from the communicator.

“Do not worry my lord I will capture as many humans as I can on my way to your lair” The fusion answered to the voice. Capture humans!, I thought to myself. I looked to my sister who was looking at me and we were both looking at each other in fear. I immediately got up and ran as fast I could with Autumn running close behind me. I looked back to see if he had seen us and was chasing us. To my surprise he wasn’t chasing us but he was staring straight at us. He was just reaching for the floor and stuck his hand into the ground and then all of a sudden the ground beneath us began to crack. Then I remembered how Ben always stuck his hand in the ground as Diamondhead and shot villains with diamonds from the ground. Now the ground was glowing green and I grabbed my sister and jumped away from the hole. We hardly made it from the diamonds and they had cut right through our clothes.

I could see through the diamonds and saw that he was talking into his communicator. I took the chance and began to run with Autumn north. We ran right into a cardboard castle and ran up the wall and went ahead. I looked behind us now and saw Fusion Diamondhead riding of something that had a bunch of rocks tentacles and could float. He was searching for us so we head into a construction area and hid inside one of the unfinished buildings.

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