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PostSubject: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Wed Apr 08, 2009 7:54 pm

Within this month i will post a new story about Cookie and Autumn so just watch out for it i'll post it once i have the first 2 chapters finished
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Wed Apr 08, 2009 8:00 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Wed Apr 08, 2009 8:03 pm

Thanx Very Happy It's gonna be pretty diferent but it'll actually mention Xavier and Sailex and more cartoon network characters

EDIT: This part was pretty dumb to add Embarassed Razz geek king


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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Sat Apr 25, 2009 12:01 am

Welp here's the first chapters finaly Smile
Freshman Year



Chapter 1: The War Begins
Part 1: The Concert



“C’mon Autumn the party’s this way” Her brother said. “I know Cookie, I’m coming” she answered. Today was the last day of Cookie and Autumn’s freshman year at Pokey Oaks. “Finally the end of the year dance!” one of the kids said excited for the party. The kids at Pokey Oaks had a great time and partied for hours. “That was a great party” Cookie said exhausted from the games, dancing, and playing around. “Yup! Well now we have to walk ALL the way home” Autumn said. “No, u don’t have to” a voice said “Y can’t your parents pick u up?” “O hey Cam” Cookie said “Autumn look it’s your boyfriend” Cookie whispered in Autumn’s ear teasing her. “Shut up!” she whispered back “Don’t worry Cam we can walk home it’s just that our parents are working all the way Downtown at Steam Alley” “Well I can drive u home” Cam answered “I just got my driver’s license 2 weeks ago and my own car last week” “Sure!” Autumn answered right away. “Ok apparently my sister wants to go with u” Cookie said as he pushed Autumn towards Cam. Then Autumn started to blush Embarassed when she looked and she was accidently kissing Cam. Then she pulled her hoodie over her head and ran to the back of the car. Cam began to blush a little and Cookie got in the car. “So… Where do u guys live?” Cam asked. “We live at Tech Square” Cookie answered. “So… u guys going to the concert tonight at City Center?” Cam asked. “Yea sure we’ll be there just drops us off home so we can get ready” Autumn answered “We’ll meet u there!” They arrived at their house and Autumn grabbed Cookie and dragged him out. “How could just hint out that I like him Mad ” Autumn told Cookie still embarrassed about what Cookie had done. “It was just a joke” Cookie answered. Then a flash came from the sky. “”What was that?” Cookie asked. “Maybe it’s the fireworks for the concert let’s hurry Cam’s probably waiting for us” Autumn said. “Well u better not keep your boyfriend waiting” Cookie said. “Let’s just go” Autumn said. The twins got ready and went to the concert with their bike and scooter. They got to City Center and found Cam. “Hey Cam we’re here” Autumn said the moment she found him. “Hey Autumn” Cam said “Hey Cookie u guys got here just on time, the concert’s just beginning.” “And now our first act the Beat-Alls!” a kid that was bald with sunglasses announced from the stage.



“Hey Cookie is it just me or does that kid seem REAL familiar?” Autumn asked. “Yea he does” Cookie answered. Then a four-man band came out the singer was a girl that had a golden crown with a big jewel in the middle and a shirt that had yellow and black stripes and behind her were a pink looking bigfoot, a devil looking creature with crab hands, and a monkey with a glass jar thing on his head. “Wow these are some pretty freaky costumes” Cam said. “Yup” “Ditto” Cookie and Autumn answered. “We Hate’em! We Hate’em!” They repeated over and over again. In about a minute everyone in the concert were singing along with them including Cookie, Autumn, and Cam. Then in the sky the word “The Beat-Alls” appeared in blue, green, and red. “Cool lights” Cookie said. “Hey what’s that green light…? It’s getting bigger and closer” Autumn said looking up to the sky. “Evacuate the stage!!!” Someone said over an intercom. “Autumn c’mon move!” Cam said as he grabbed her hand. The three got up from the stage and looked back. “I think whatever happened is over Suspect ” Cookie said as more and more kids ran by and nothing had fallen. “Well we might as well get home before our parents get mad Mad or scared :affraid: about us” Cookie said. “Bye Cam” Autumn said. “Bye Autumn” Cam said and kissed her on the cheek good-bye I love you . “Autumn c’mon” Cookie said as he pulled Autumn.



Cookie and Autumn got home in a couple of minutes. “Hey Mom, Hey Dad we’re back!” Cookie and Autumn said as they entered their home. “Hhmmm…No answer Suspect ” Cookie said “U guys here?” “Maybe they went out for dinner after work” Autumn suggested. “Well no point in waiting for them if we don’t know when they’re gonna get here” Cookie said. The twins got changed and went to bed Sleep .

Hope u guys like it Smile


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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:38 am

Crying or Very sad Sad No one is answering and it's been over a day Sad Crying or Very sad
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PostSubject: hi   Sun Apr 26, 2009 1:30 pm

Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Sun Apr 26, 2009 4:21 pm

Uummm..... Hi Very Happy

Did u read the story Suspect
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PostSubject: umm   Sun Apr 26, 2009 5:06 pm

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............ yeah
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Sun Apr 26, 2009 5:09 pm

You guys really confuse me sometimes...

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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Sun Apr 26, 2009 5:14 pm

Lol yup!

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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Sun Apr 26, 2009 5:18 pm

Yup, are you trying to merge with Tifa's story a bit?

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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Sun Apr 26, 2009 5:22 pm

Just a tiny bit king Not that much but yea i'm trying to connect my story with other stories king geek study lol!
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PostSubject: green   Sun Apr 26, 2009 8:04 pm

Green, I confuse myself sometimes.
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Sun Apr 26, 2009 10:14 pm

I thought so... to both.

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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Mon Apr 27, 2009 3:15 pm

"... to both" XD lol! ROFLOL
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Mon Apr 27, 2009 3:58 pm

Heheh you liked that, eh? I have random bits of hilarious replies of sarcasm sometimes. xD

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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Tue Apr 28, 2009 12:50 am

aw cute! and nice conversion (did i use that right?) into my story. wen r u gonna write more?

o and maybe u should seperate the dialogue cuz that was the only hard part reading
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:11 am

I'll try that Tifa Smile Thanx for the feedback and yes i am working on Part 2 right now Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Tue Apr 28, 2009 12:48 pm

Coolio, can't wait Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Tue Apr 28, 2009 4:29 pm

The next part will be out in either a few minutes or 2 hours (I've got to go to karate in about 10-15 mintues Mad Sad )
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Wed Apr 29, 2009 2:52 pm

Here's the next chapter Yay! king
Part 2: The Suburbs


“Hey mom what are we having for breakfast?!” Cookie asked as he woke up. There was no answer. “Mom? Dad?” Cookie said “U guys here!” He went up to their room to check. “Man, they went off to work already! Autumn wake up! Me want breakfast!”

“Ugh… U are so lazy, u know that?” Autumn answered.

“C’mooooonnn” Cookie whined.

“Ok, ok, man, u act like a little kid sometimes” Autumn said “Even if u are older by a couple of minutes.”

“I’m gonna see what’s on TV” Cookie said as he grabbed the remote and turned the TV on to the news channel.

“Breaking News” an announcer said “The Suburbs has been invaded by an alien planet, and everyone has had something personal stolen from them.”

“Cookie, breakfast’s ready!” Autumn called.

“Did u know that ‘aliens’ are attacking the planet?” he said as they had breakfast.

“Where?” Autumn asked.

“They said that the aliens are attacking the suburbs” Cookie answered “Maybe we should go visit. We could see that mansion we use to always go to.”

“Yea sure, but what mansion are u talking about?” Autumn answered.

“I remember some mansion that we use to go to all the time. Only thing is I forget what was there or where it is.”

“Ok we’ll go” Autumn answered “Well shouldn’t we call Cam for a ride?”

“Of course the first person you think of is Cam” Cookie answered “But yea sure.” Autumn called Cam and he came over right away.

“So, Autumn, what do u need?” Cam asked.

“Cookie and I decided to visit the suburbs for today” Autumn answered.

“Sure” Cam answered “but did u hear the news about the aliens.”

“Yea that’s y we wanna go and to see this mansion that we use to play at” Cookie answered. Cam drove them to City Station.

“What are we doing here?” Cookie asked.

“There’s a SCAMPER up there that can take us to the suburbs” Cam answered pointing up at a tower. They went in and up to where the SCAMPER was.

“U guys got money, right?” Cam asked.

“A little bit, y?” Cookie answered.

“We’re gonna need money to pay the dude to fly us” Cam said. They went and talked to the driver.

“Hey can u fly us to the suburbs? Wait … do I know u???” Autumn asked.

“O my god!!! Numbuh 5 look quick!” The chubby boy that was driving the SCAMPER said.

“Holy cannoli! U guys are alive!” Numbuh 5 said as she hugged Cookie and Autumn.

”What do u mean?!?” Cookie asked thinking she was insane.

“O no they must have decommissioned!” Numbuh 5 said astonished at what she was saying.

“What are you talking about?” Cookie asked confused at what was going on.

“Haven’t u seen any people with the letters KND on them? And didn’t they look familiar???” Numbuh 5 asked.

“Well now that u mention it yea” Autumn answered “There was also a kid with sunglasses and red sweater at the concert at City Center last night that looked REAL familiar.”

“That was Numbuh 5’s leader, Numbuh 1” Numbuh 5 said. “Now that u guys are back we should try and get u re-commissioned” Numbuh 2 said.

“Wait! I need Cookie and Autumn to back for a moment before they go off to battle” Dex called from the SCAMPER’s communications.



They drove back to Tech Square and went to Dex.

“Hey Dex what’s wrong?” Cookie asked.

“Edd has sent me a prototype of what we are calling the nanocoms. I made copies to give to people that are here to help with the war” Dex said as he gave them each their own blue watch that had various buttons “These will let u keep in touch with any of us such as me, the KND, rangers, etc.. They also have a shrink ray to shrink items that can help u along the way and a map, mission journal, a tube so u can contain Fusion Matter for when u get some, and three pods for nanos.”

“What are nanos and FM?” Cookie asked. Just as Dex was about to answer Numbuh 2 called on their nanocoms

“Guys I need help! Quick!”

Then Dex said “Go! Someone will explain along the way.” So they left with many questions unanswered and rushed back to the SCAMPER where Numbuh 2 and Numbuh 5 were.

“What’s wrong?” Autumn asked.

“Fuse is planning an attack on the suburbs in a few days on the suburbs” Numbuh 5 said “So we need the three of u guys to go and defeat as many fusions as u can before they attack and destroy it.”

“Uummm… What are fusions?” Cam asked.

“Fusions are dark twisted versions of us heroes, such as me and Numbuh 2, which are made of one of our personal belongings” Numbuh 2 answered.

“And what are nanos and FM???” Cookie asked.

“Wow! U guys are in for a whole new world” Numbuh 5 said “Ok FM is the matter that these creatures are made up of, right now they have only begun to spawn at Sector V but there are still pods everywhere in the suburbs that are beginning to activate and will soon begin to spawn.”

Then Numbuh 2 finished what she was saying “After that we suspect Fuse will send Terrafusers, those are the pods that the FM creatures are coming from, to the wilds and here downtown. So if we want to win this war we’re going to need to save the suburbs before they are destroyed and then you’ll get to save the wilds and here downtown. If u make it that far we may be able to win this war!”

So u need us to go fight these aliens and hope we live” Cookie said.

“Well… yea sorta… but at least you’ll have special armor that can help protect you from the toxic FM” Numbuh 2 added.

“WHOA!!! TOXIC!!!” Cookie yelled in fear.

Uummm… Yea” Numbuh 2 said.

Oh my god! Just go onto nanos” Cookie said.

“Well nanos are miniature versions of us heroes that are made up FM and th-“

“WAIT I thought that FM was evil and toxic!” Cookie said as he cut off Numbuh 5 mid-sentence.

“They are made up of refined FM that we use to make them and as I was saying they also have powers that may help you on your journey, but right now they have reported that there was only one fusion but they defeated it. But if u heard the news Fuse has stolen many of our stuff which means he is most likely creating more fusions and sending them here as we speak” Numbuh 5 said on one BIG LONG breath.

Then the SCAMPER began to sink down from the sky. “Numbuh 2 what are u doing, u should warn us before u land!” Numbuh 5 said as she balanced herself.

“It’s not me we’ve been hit!” Numbuh 2 said as he tried to land the ship.

After about a minute they landed without anyone getting hurt. “How’d you do that, Numbuh 2?!?” Cookie asked amazed at the fact they didn’t get a scratch on them.

Hope u guys enjoyed it Smile I think it was longer than a part Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Wed Apr 29, 2009 4:39 pm

Was great, although I seen most of it previous Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Wed Apr 29, 2009 4:41 pm

Really? Suspect O well, I thought i sent it to Tifa Neutral Question scratch confused king

Nvm i just remembered that i sent it to u AND Tifa but Tifa got it when i finished more of it Neutral
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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Wed Apr 29, 2009 4:45 pm

Lmao, you sent it to me. Well maybe you sent both of us it, who knows?

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PostSubject: Re: Cookie and Autumn 2nd story   Wed Apr 29, 2009 4:47 pm

Yup i sent it to both of u but i sent it to Tifa when i was more finished Razz

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