TheWriter01 VIP Member
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| Subject: Basicaly my Homework form my summer courses. (Based on The Haunted Mansion attraction in Disneyland) Mon Jul 27, 2009 11:27 pm | |
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Atticus Thorn’s secret Hideaway, Louisiana Mansion, 1879, Night
ATTICUS THORN’S SECRET TOWER ROOM.
Zeke crawls out of the hole in the ground Atticus made when he pulled Zeke into the room below. The Dullest, The Organist, The Knight, The Opera Singer, The Old Lady, and The Pirate Ghosts come up to Zeke giving their thanks.
THE DULLEST
Shew Doggie! Now that was some shooting!
Cut to
Zeke looks faint and falls to the ground, obviously dead.
THE OPERA SINGER
Zeke? Zeke?!
THE PIRATE
Oooooo. Must have had the wind knocked right out of his sails.
THE OLD LADY
Oh1 Oh my! He’s…He’s gone.
THE KNIGHT
It was an honor to have served with you.
THE DULLEST
Bravest fella’ I ever met.
THE ORAGNIST
He did sort of grow on you after awhile. Poor little beggar.
Cut to
The ghosts walk away and talk to them selves. Zeke gets up and rubs his head. The ghosts see him and run up to him. The ghosts pat him on the back and congratulate him.
THE OLD LADY
We thought we’d lost you!
THE KNIGHT
You were victorious! Atticus Thorn and The Order of Shadows will bother us no more!
THE OPERA SINGER
And it’s all thanks to you Zeke and Madam……Leyota?
Cut to
Zeke looks around and sees the lantern. Zeke pulls the crystal ball out of the center and holds it in his hands. Madam Leyota’s head is not in the Crystal ball.
THE KNIGHT
Leyota, Are you there? Madam Leyota?
Madam Leyota appears in the Crystal Ball.
MADAM LEYOTA
Take that you bloated sack of souls! What’s its over already?! Did we win?
Madam Leyota winks at Zeke.
THE OLD LADY
Yes, Yeas it’s over and every things fine. More then fine now. Their free Leyota, the souls, you freed them all.
The ghosts disappear and slowly drift up towards Heaven and wave their good byes.
Cut to
Mansion Grounds, Louisiana, 1879-1899, Afternoon.
As the scene goes on, the grounds become lighter and prettier and much less “cursed”.
ZEKE (Over)
With their troubles put to rest, the ghosts returned to the Afterlife. I made up my mind to stay on for a time as caretaker of the estate. And after words, with the blessing of Madam Leyota, I continued to peruse my dream of becoming a writer. Only many years later did I come to understand how on that dreary October afternoon when I first opened the door to that “Haunted” Mansion, I had opened the door to the rest of my life.
Final Fade Out.
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| Subject: Re: Basicaly my Homework form my summer courses. (Based on The Haunted Mansion attraction in Disneyland) Sun Aug 23, 2009 2:01 pm | |
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TheWriter01 VIP Member
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