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PostSubject: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Wed Jun 10, 2009 10:00 am

i decided to do a fan-fic even though im lazy and maybe be posting chapters here and there but i'll most likely put up chapters anyways:

Prologue:
Chief and his bro’s were on a planet called Shumazane, until fuse attacked their home planet. That’s when they started fighting fuse on Shumazane when he hit them HARD they separated on to different planets, atomic and dawg landed on Icelonza and chief and epic landed on Miltoni. They didn’t se each other for a year until Chief had to use the communicator on epic and found out that they were in the same planet but on whole different sides when they fully developed their powers that they were taught chief morphed into a jet and landed where epic was, but atomic tried using the communicator on chief and it worked chief and epic left Miltoni and landed on Icelonza. They flew towards their home planet, to find that it was gone deep inside planet fuse, but it wasn’t just that, that made them sad, they lost their parents in the fight against fuse on Shumazane but as they saw its next target a planet called “Earth” chief morphed into a jet and started flying towards Earth. They didn’t want this planet to suffer like they did.
So now their in the fight against Fuse, again.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Wed Jun 10, 2009 11:35 am

Chapter 1:
A New Home:
As chief, epic, atomic and dawg traveled through sector V, Epic said “Hey I know this place!” He exclaimed “It’s called Earth!” He said. As they were walking, Epic told them about Earth, and that’s when they went all the way to Pokey Oaks and saw this big brown house. It was huge, the pool was empty, and so was the house. They went in and saw nothing besides bathrooms, rooms and cabinets. They walked out and decided to stay there, they could pay for it and so they did. Once done they went to buy everything they needed beds, cloths everything.

“OOHH AAHH what’s that?” dawg asked in amazement. On the shelf it was labeled Wii. “Can we get it chief can we can we?!?!” dawg asked desperately “fine, we’ll get it” chief said rolling his eyes “YES!” dawg exclaimed. Dawg continued to look around he saw so many glorious things, but he knew they had to save money. The store was painted red with many selves all shiny and clean. “Ok we got what we need let’s go” chief said.

“Did you get the ice cream?” atomic asked. “You and your ice cream!” chief groaned “yes I got it!” chief answered “10 buckets of it you happy?!” chief said. They left the store and walked toward their house. As they looked up it was the afternoon and they had to start building the beds, once they were done they were perfect for sleeping on. They jumped on their beds and fell asleep in peace….forgotten about Lord Fuse and his planet about to attack Earth
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Wed Jun 10, 2009 11:44 am

That's good, I like the story so far. I would suggest that you try and make it longer, but you know that, and more description will make it longer so you're pretty much good. Smile

Edit: And BTW, you might wanna put in some more dialogue. Okay, I'm done now. XD
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:40 pm

Chapter 2:
New Friends and Old Enemies (part 1 of 2):

Chief woke up on a Saturday, sluggish and lazy. Chief got dressed in his proton outfit. As he turned on his computer and he sat on the chair. His bro’s got up because the sound that the computer makes when it turns on is like the family alarm clock. Atomic got dressed in his atomic outfit, epic in his engineer outfit and dawg in his gamma blacklight outfit. As dawg went down stairs to eat he felt like something was wrong, but he didn’t mind. He got himself cereal, as he walked toward the TV and turned it on, but something was wrong, it wouldn’t work, he tried again and it finally worked

“Weird…” dawg said in confusion. He went back to the table and started eating, atomic went down stairs and got out his ice cream from the freezer, and put it in the microwave to melt, “Have you noticed that you’re the only kid who puts his icecream in the microwave to melt atomic?” dawg asked almost laughing at him. “Yes, yes I do know that dawg…..” atomic answered. Epic walked into the garage to finish his latest invention, no one knew what he’s making but him. Once dawg went outside to feed his dawg he noticed that the sky was turning green and in the sky was the green glob with a bunch of planets in it, Planet Fuse,

“AAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!” dawg yelled in fright, almost passing out. Atomic ran outside towards dawg “WAT IS IT?!” he asked worried,

“l-look in-i-into…the..sky…” he said in shock, “oh….” Atomic said. Chief came running down the stairs almost tripping and falling, and came outside and behind him was Epic,


“WAT?!” Chief and Epic said at the same time. “look at the sky…” dawg said getting over his sacredness “oohh…” Chief said ready to fight, “interesting” Epic said in his “ready to discover” voice.

“Well….Chief? w-what now?” dawg asked sighing because he knew they were going to fight. “You ready guys?” Chief asked “yeah” all of them said. They went back in the house and out to the front yard. They saw 4 girls fighting gravel golems and we knew we had to help, Chief jumped in and started shooting gravel golems. When they finished they started talking, “Hi I’m chief and these are my bro’s Epic, atomic and dawg” chief said, “I’m angel and these are my friends Tina Amy and Lina.” Angel said. Atomic looked at Amy and it was love at first sight, a pink jacket, yellow tanktop, black and pink shoes and a black skirt, Atomic couldn’t stop staring, dawg slapped him and his brain started running again

“Do you like her?” dawg asked “umm….no, I defiantly don’t!” he said trying to hide the fact that he likes her, “Sure atomic…..” dawg said about to laugh. “I take it you’ve lived here right?” chief asked, “well….actually…we don’t we…had to leave our home planet because it was….well…invaded by Fuse….” Angel said about to cry. “Oh….well our home planet was too….” Chief said sadly, “Aaaawwww….Atomic is in love..” dawg said in a cute kind of voice and then laughed.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:54 pm

Cool Can't wait for the Next chapter Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Its practicly the best thing Ive ever read! Com
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:58 pm

WOW....THX BRI!!!! -starts to cry tears of joy- Sad Sad Sad Sad THX AGAIN Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:24 pm

Dawgdedawg wrote:
WOW....THX BRI!!!! -starts to cry tears of joy- Sad Sad Sad Sad THX AGAIN Very Happy

And I Know youve been waiting for my new chapter its up right now Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Fri Jun 12, 2009 12:04 pm

BriYoung101 wrote:
Dawgdedawg wrote:
WOW....THX BRI!!!! -starts to cry tears of joy- Sad Sad Sad Sad THX AGAIN Very Happy

And I Know youve been waiting for my new chapter its up right now Very Happy

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NEW CHAPTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:20 pm

srry for the long wait pplz BUT THE CHAPTER IS FINALLY HERE!!!!



Chapter 2:
New friends and old enemies (part 2 of 2):
“We have more friends you want to meet them?” Angel asked. “Sure” Chief replied. They walked to the Cul-De-Sac and noticed a boy with an engineer shirt, blue pants, brown eyes, brown hair and green/red/orange shoes,

“hi!” Ben said, “Hi I’m chief these are my bro’s dawg, epic, and atomic.” Chief told Ben. “Let’s go to meet our other friend, Arlen Cool, Arlen for short” Angel said. They walked toward Genius Grove and saw Arlen, a girl with a black shirt jeans and black/white shoes. “Hi I’m Arlen.” She told them, “I’m Chief…” but before he could finish he was interrupted by numbuh 5

“Numbuh 5 heard that a fusion was at the Nuclear Plant!” Numbuh 5 yelled. Right then numbuh 5 looked at chief and was about to shoot him, “WAIT!” chief yelled in terror, “I’M A PERSON NOT A FUSION!” chief yelled. “Really?!” numbuh 5 asked, “YES, yes….” Chief said starting to calm down. “Then why did I see a fusion EXACTLY like you?” numbuh 5 asked ready to shoot chief. “Oh no….fusion chief?!” chief said.

“Well I guess you have a fusion of yourself” numbuh 5 said, putting down her weapon. “A fusion chief?” Angel asked, “Yup….he has a fusion of him” epic answered. “I know where were heading guys….” He said sighing, as they traveled to the nuclear plant, they fought many monsters on their way toward the nuclear plant. They past a cemetery and Billy’s house. They finally made it to the nuclear plant which was covered in Fusion Matter,

“Hey, Dexbot transport us into the nuclear plant.” Chief ordered, “Yes child,” The Dexbot replied, “Nice weather we are having, do you agree with this statement?” The Dexbot asked as he warped us in. “Where’s the lair?!’ Dawg yelled impatiently, “we’ll find it hold on…” Epic said. They looked up and down, left and right and finally found it. “THERE IT IS!” Amy exclaimed, “Aawww I bet u think she has a cute voice” Dawg said,’…S-shut up” Atomic said filled with anger.

“Well…get me some Fusion Matter when you guys beat Fusion Chief….I’m staying here” Arlen said. “You’re coming with us MISSY!” Dawg said, “No I’m not go-OW!” Arlen said. “YOU’RE COMING MISSY!” Dawg ordered. “Fine!” Arlen said annoyed. They walked in the lair and started destroying every weird welder in there.

“There f-fre-freaky” Arlen said as a joke hoping to get out and lay in her bed and relax. “I know you’re kiddin Arlen” Chief said smartly, “Whatever” Arlen said rolling her eyes. Right then a big ball of fusion matter came right tat them and everything went black.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Sun Jun 21, 2009 1:45 pm

Cool Chapter!! Very Happy Smile

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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Tue Jun 30, 2009 4:39 pm

finally:

Chapter 3:
Time Machine? Or Disaster?!:

As Chief got up he saw Tina and Angel hitting Fusion Matter, It took awhile for him to completely wake up, but once he did he noticed they were trapped in a Fusion Matter cage. “No! Were completely trapped!” Tina yelled in anger. “Calm down Tina! We’ll find a way out of this! I promise!” Angel said in great confidence.

“You fools are trying to break out?!” Fusion chief said with an evil smirk on his face, “You won’t get anywhere!” fusion chief said making that smirk look more evil and more evil.

“Chief?! It’s nice to see you buddy…” fusion chief said, “Let us out fusion chief!” Chief demanded. “Not a chance chief…never” fusion chief answered. Fusion chief started walking away. “Are we stuck here?!” Atomic asked,

“No!” Ben said turning into swampfire. “Y-y-you…you can turn into swampfire?” Atomic asked “Yeah, but lets break outta here first!” Ben exclaimed. He broke the Fusion Matter with heat like eggs frying on the sidewalk. “SSHH we need to get out of here quietly.” Ben said, they got out as quiet as ants.

“Wow! Thanks Ben” everyone said, “doesn’t mention it!” Ben said. Chief’s communicator started to ring, “hello?” Chief asked, “It’s me Dexter! Come to Dexlabs I have an important assignment for you!” Dexter said, “Ok” Chief answered, “But bring your bro’s too, and your friends HURRY!” Dexter said. “Ok, I’ll be there as soon as I can.” Chief answered and hung up.

“Well dex wants us to go to dexlabs for an important assignment so let’s go!” chief said and jumped on the jump pad to the bus and everyone followed. “Did dex tell you why he wanted us there?” Angel asked, “No…But I’m sure it’s important!” Chief said ready for adventure. The bus drove them through the freaky graveyard and towards tech square, where they jumped off.

“So dex what’s the emergency?” Chief asked. “It’s a time travel experiment!” Dexter exclaimed and showed them to the time machine. “Wow!” Dawg exclaimed in amazement, “Yes it’s amazing, but hurry! There are other kids waiting!” Dexter said. “Ok, ok.” Chief said.
“You will need these, they are called nanocoms yellow faces are if you are in a group and teal faces for other people that have nanocoms, and you can add people as buddies” Dexter explained. “Ok, thanks dex!” Chief said.

“Wow! Are you seeing these readings?! A great day for science indeed!” Dexter said amazed. “He he” Dee Dee giggled. “Ssshhh” Dee Dee told us, ‘Oohh, what does this button do?!” Dee Dee exclaimed then pressed it, “Dee Dee NNNOOO!!” Dexter exclaimed, but it was to late, the time machine went totally crazy and all the kids in there saw colorful lights, it crashed.
“You are further in the future then Dexter intended” Computress said. “Wow! Where did you come from?!” Numbuh 5 exclaimed in confusion and amazement. “Now’s not the time numbuh 5, we need to defeat these spawns!” Ben told numbuh 5. They told them about fuse and started fighting.

Numbuh 2 called us and told us to get a key from an oil ogre and bring it back. They went to buttercup,

“There’s a Fusion Buttercup in that infected zone! Infected zones are the nastiest and most infected places in the world, luckily Dexter has force fields around them so the infection can’t get out.” Buttercup told. They went into the infected zone and jumped on floating wooden platforms to fusion buttercup’s lair.

“Quick over here!” Dexter exclaimed, “Fusions are sick and evil monsters of us!” Dexter explained, we ran up to fusion Buttercup and started fighting. When we won Dexter stood back and told us to go to the S.C.A.M.P.E.R.

“I’m going to stay here to make sure fusion buttercup doesn’t steal anything from my lab you guys go ahead and go” A hologram of Dexter told us. “Ok, next stop, Sector V!” Numbuh 2 exclaimed, he drove the S.C.A.M.P.E.R. to Sector V right when tech square blew up. “This is gonna be a long journey” Chief said. “But I know we can do it.” Angel said with a determined smile, turning into a sigh.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Thu Jul 02, 2009 7:04 pm

just tryin to see something...dont lookat this...

p.s.almost finished with chapter 4
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Sat Jul 04, 2009 12:53 am

cool story dawg! its awesome Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Sat Jul 04, 2009 10:40 pm

hey.....i'm up to the same chapter as you are Smile

It rocks by the way.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Sun Jul 05, 2009 12:35 am

Great job dawg as always Wink

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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Mon Jul 06, 2009 12:18 am

thx! and srry fpr not posting yet....im always forced to do something -_- anyways working on chap 4
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Tue Jul 07, 2009 11:08 am

hey man just write the stuff let the pencil do all the work. afterwards wen u r finished then reflect on the things u want to inpprove on ur story. catn wait till chapter 4
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Tue Jul 07, 2009 11:09 am

yuperz...ok
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:05 pm

srry for the long wait...again Razz:

Chapter 5:
The Future fiends:
Once the S.C.A.M.P.E.R. stopped at Sector V we all noticed it wasn’t like it was before the disaster, it was crashed into the ground and tilted. Three girls and one boy get out of another S.C.A.M.P.E.R. then walked up to us.

“Angel?!” Kayla asked, “Kayla?!” Angel asked, they both hugged each other and went into a conversation about make-up. “Uummm….why talk about make-up…WHEN THERE’S FUSE TO DESTROY!!!!??” Dawg exclaimed. “Oh...Right, sorry!” Angel and Kayla said.

“Guys I heard there’s a fusion of me running around the infected zone here go talk to numbuh 622 about it” Numbuh 2 explained. They ran to numbuh 622, “Hey, yeah there is a fusion of numbuh 2 in our training zone you need to get rid of him!” Numbuh 622 commanded. “Sure, it’ll be easy!” Bella exclaimed, they ran to the infected zone and to the lair,

“Wow...it’s totally…weird…in here” Yumi whispered to herself as they defeated monsters. “It’s fusion numbuh 2!!!!” Epic exclaimed, fusion numbuh 2 came running at them. Angel got on her hoverboard and sliced Fusion numbuh 2 then Yumi yelled and made fusion numbuh 2 deaf and unconscious, chief and Andrew then started to shoot him while dawg sliced him in the back. “Bbwwwaaaaaaa” Fusion Numbuh 2 screamed while sinking into the ground.

“Go to Mandark’s house and defeat fusion Eddy!” a little Version of Eddy said, “Strange….but ok….” Chief said. “Hi amigo! Go to the muy scary peech creek estates infected zone!” A tiny version of Eduardo said. “Ok…” Chief said in confusion. They ran to Fusion Eddy’s lair, they destroyed every monster in there. Once they saw fusion Eddy they ran at him and he ran at them.

Fusion eddy started throwing FM balls sooner then we expected, Tina, Atomic and Amy were blocking the FM balls with their swords, Angel got on her hover board and rode toward fusion eddy and she tried slicing him but fusion eddy and he took her hoverboard and melted it with FM “NOO!” Angel yelled as she fell on the floor. Lina helped angel up and Andrew and dawg sliced him in half. “Wow…he was tough” Dawg said getting out of the lair and heading for peech creek estates.

They got into fusion Eduardo’s lair and started fighting some monsters, when they reached Fusion Eduardo he charged at them when they had no energy, He took Angel and Amy and he threw them at a near by wall then atomic and chief started charging at him with swords and started slicing him, fusion Eduardo was so strong that he pushed them far away with his horns “Ow…” Atomic said going unconscious and so did chief. Dawg jumped over him and stabbed him in the back. He sunk without saying any word.

“Whew…He was kinda…..tough” Dawg said weakly, “ANGEL, AMY!!” Kayla yelled frightened and ran toward them. “We need to take them to someone…FAST!” Epic stated running to the KND base.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:34 pm

hey dawg ur stories r wild. that is y i like them. favorite qouate is :"Dawg jumped over him and stabbed him in the back. He sunk without saying any word. "
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:58 pm

That was..Wow amazing!It was sspectaacular I can't even put it in words I see you added Renee's Characters too. Keep it up!

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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:22 pm

yes..yes indeed..THX!
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:57 pm

Renee said it was aawesome and she said thx for adding her characters
and Practicly Amy's the only one who talks about make-up angls the determined one
and Tina's the Tough, quiet one


So practicly they're all very tough xD

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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Wed Jul 08, 2009 11:14 pm

well i can edit it if u want....and tell her i said ur welcome and thx
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PostSubject: Re: The Fight for Life (a fan-fic by dawgdedawg)   Wed Jul 08, 2009 11:15 pm

Nah its alright Just don't make her talk about make-up again xD

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