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PostSubject: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Mon Jun 08, 2009 5:49 pm

prologue

Lord Fuse waited impatiently for them. He kept tapping his fingers- tap tap tap on the throne arm anxiously for his head scientists to show him their newest creation. He knew if they didn't come in 5 seconds he would rip someone's head off.
They showed up in milliseconds.
"What have you got now" asked Fuse. He was getting impatient with their experiments. One by one, they failed or blew up. "Well," Fusion Dexter started, "we've created-" "YOU'VE CREATED!" Fuse shouted. " HAVE YOU EVER THOUGHT THAT NOT ONE OF YOUR CREATIONS HAVE EVER WORKED?? HOW WOULD YOU OR I EXPECT THIS ONE TO DO ANYTHING??" He huffed.
Surprised at Fuse's outburst, Fusion Dexter hesistantly explained. "We've made an earthling like one to help us conquer Earth. This has many ablities and powers to discover Earth's secrets and nature. Fusion Mandark bring it in!" Then Fusion Mandark brought in a wheeled table covered with a grey cloth. "Behold!" he said. He unveiled the cloth and revealed....
A baby. It was a baby. A baby.
Fuse gaped at it and harshly whispered, "What is this?". Fusion Dexter explained, "Sire, it was a young humanoid. But then we started loading in the powers. Soon it became too much and the body flashed into a baby." Fuse calmed down a bit. "But this could be an advantage, for no one could suspect of it. " Fusion Mandark added. "But we need to send it back in time."
Fuse nodded. Then Fusion Dexter put the baby in a meteor. He put it in a time machine. He typed on the holographic keyboard, 2001. The machine flashed and the meteor, along with the baby, whizzed into the past to Earth.


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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Mon Jun 08, 2009 5:52 pm

CHAPTER ONE COMING TOMORROW
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:13 pm

Sounds pretty good.

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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:21 pm

Ok, I didn't want to wait until tomorrow, so here's Chapter one.

Chapter 1, part one

"I'm back, Mom." I said as I closed the door. Mom waved and said, "Hi." She was in the kitchen, chatting on the phone. I dropped my backpack and let myself fall on the sofa. I ran up the stairs to my room. I closed the door. I had a bad day at school. I always got into fights. I rolled up my sleeves, revealing a purple bruise on my right arm. I winced as I poured alcahol on the wound. I rolled the sleeve down. I ran down and asked Mom, "Where's Blaze?". "He's at his friend's house." Mom answered.
I felt disappointed. My brother Blaze often knew how to treat wounds. But I also knew that once he was at his date's house, he wouldn't be back until night. I sighed and went up to my room again. I went out to the little balcony and looked out my telescope. Even though it was day, I still wanted to observe the sky. My dad was a Plumber, and he was on a space trip. Ever since then, I've been so observant of the sky.
I decided to look around the clouds a bit. Then I spotted something. It was bright green. But it was so tiny from up there. It was a green fleck. I wiped the telescope lens to see if it was just a speck of dirt. But it was still there. I shrugged. I headed down to the front lawn.
I walked across the street to Foster's. I knocked on the two huge front doors. A large bunny dressed like a butler stepped out. "Good day, Miss Alice." he said. "Hi." I said. "Where's Mac and Bloo?" Then Mr.Herriman said, "Master Mac and Master Blooregard are on a trip with Miss Francis." "Oh.Ok." I said. Then I headed home. I was really bored.


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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Tue Jun 09, 2009 12:53 am

Great story so far. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Tue Jun 09, 2009 6:18 am

awesome so far Wink
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Wed Jun 10, 2009 3:20 pm

Chapter 1, part 2

When I got home, the phone suddenly rang as I closed the door. I picked it up and said," Hi" It was Cantara, my best bud. "Hey, Alice. I need you to come over here." she said. "What for?" I asked. "I need help choosing which dress to wear to the dance."Cantara answered. I would have been glad to say, "Sure, I'll come.", because it was so boring today. But I just shook my head even though Cantara couldn't see that. The silence made her know I wouldn't. "I can't come, Cantara. You know why," I said, "Father's over there in Peach Creek." I whispered at the word.
"Oh.Well, aren't you coming to the dance?" Cantara changed the subject. "Nah," I answered, "dances are for babies." "Well, you don't know what you're missing. Bye." she said. I put down the phone and sighed a deep sigh. Dances aren't for babies, I thought. Partners are.
After dinner, I teased Blaze for a bit. Then I watched the sky. Then I played some video games. I yawned. "I'm sleepy." I shouted. "I'm going to bed." "Suit yourself." Mom said. She was curled up in a chair, reading a novel. I smiled. It was rare to see Mom taking the time to relax and read a book. As I went upstairs, I heard Blaze complain, "Why does Alice go to bed so early?" It was true. It was Friday, and look at me, going to bed at nine.
I changed into pajamas and did what I did for when I'm going to bed. As I tucked myself in, I turned off the bedroom light. You might not realize it, but I was being brave.




Lord Fuse sat in his throne. He tapped his finger- tap tap tap- on the throne arm. He shouted, "Fusions!". Within seconds, thousands of gooey green bodies filled his throne room. "We are about to conquer Earth. But first, we must disable all Earth known foreign space objects." He announced. Fuse snapped his fingers. "It is done. 3 clever Fusions shall travel to these objects and disable them. They will kill anyone who sees them." He said. The Fusions cheered. Fuse signaled with his hand to stop. The Fusions stopped cheering. "Fusion Dexter! Fusion Mandark! Fusion Samurai Jack! Fusion Ben!" Fuse called out. The 4 called went to him. Fuse whispered something into their ears. Then he asked, "Is that clear?" The Fusions answered, "Yes, sir." These four disappeared back into the crowd. Fuse yelled, "Now we wait for the right moment to conquer. You may proceed with your things to do." The crowd rapidly hurried out of his throne room. Only one remained. Fuse walked down it and asked, "And what you got to report?" The Fusion reported, "There is a great ancient beast in the earth. We could somehow get it to work for us. Or even better, make a Fusion version of it! And there's some people that are.... trustworthy. They could help." Then Fuse answered, "No. We don't need any Earthling's help. But I love that idea about the Fusion version of this beast." The Fusion smiled. "Well, I'll be off now. I'll report back tomorrow as usual." It left and lunged at me.
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Thu Jun 11, 2009 12:41 am

Please continue! Awesome story! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Thu Jun 11, 2009 1:58 am

What you got against mah daddeh?!?

JK, insider joke sorta xD

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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Thu Jun 11, 2009 9:10 am

you need to continue this story is cool. if only you could publish it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Thu Jun 11, 2009 5:14 pm

To Greenganon : You'll see in part 3.

Chapter 1 part 3 coming up in a couple of minutes
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Thu Jun 11, 2009 5:39 pm

I just read it and I like it. Keep up the good work!
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Thu Jun 11, 2009 6:30 pm

Chapter 1, Part 3

I woke up, my heart beating fast. I held on tight to my neck. That monster had fangs the size of a saber toothed cat! It was so vivid, I actually thought those monsters were in my room. I slowly pulled my hand away from my neck. I was relieved to see no blood on my hand. I looked over to my alarm clock. It read 4:08 am. So late and so not bright outside. As I got up, my arm suddenly pained. I had forgotten about my hurt arm. I carefully moved my right arm. I gritted my teeth at my bad luck. I couldn't write good right now. I had to write with my left arm, which wrote wobbly. I, clutching my bad arm, went over to my closet. I got a cotton wrap with my good hand and wrapped it over my bruise. Then I went over to my telescope. I didn't need to use writing to use it.
So I looked in it. Looked good in the right. Looked good in the left. Then I again spotted the green spot in the sky. It looked slightly bigger this time. I wondered why. Suddenly, for some reason, I wanted to stop looking at the stars. So I did and reached for the little notepad. I flipped it open and wrote with my good arm. It was wobbly and impossible to make out, but if you made itt out you could see this:
March 13, 2012 4:08
Here I am, awake early AGAIN. These nightmares of mine keep robbing me of my sleep. Can I please have atleast one night of peaceful sleep? Anyway, that green spot I saw? It grew! What is it? It could be a growing nebula.


I flipped it closed. I placed it on the night drawer. I put on the slippers. I tiptoed down the stairs and opened the door. I ran and ran until I came near a sign that said, Delightful Developments. Delightful, huh? I walked slowly to a piece of fence.I jumped the fence and froze in mid-air. I had almost landed in a deep rut surronding the fence. Clever Father. Then I jumped back. I spotted an open area between two fences. Or is he? I walked through it. Nothing happened. I smiled. I walked over to a little peg in the dirt. I gently kicked it. A hidden stairway revealed itself. I walked throught. If you watched me from afar, you'd think the ground just swallowed me up.
There was a huge laboratory under Delightful Developments. It was HUGE. And it all belonged to the Plumbers. And I was the daughter of a Plumber. So I could gain acess to it. There was a supercomputer in the middle of the lab. I put my hand on the little security screen. It said, "Acess granted. Person identified- Alice Acornberry.". As soon as it said that, the screen flashed. WARNING METEORS HEADING TO EARTH WILL NOT BURN THROUGH ATMOSHPHERE it read. I gasped. "Oh god!" I said. Then I immediately called all the Plumbers. Most of them didn't answer. They were sleeping. So I called the person you could trust.
But when I called, I only got Computeress's voice. "Salutations. Dexter is busy at the moment so please wait until a Dexbot is able to help you." she said. I waited until a Dexbot could answer my call. "Hello," it said. "How are you doing today?" I sighed and hung up. Even though they were built by a genius, they weren't genius enough to deliver a message. Then I noticed the time was 6 am. I quickly ran up the stairs, carefully hurried out of Delightful Developments, and into my home.
It was daylight now, and I impaitently waited for someone to wake up. I killed time by reading in my father's study, watching the sky especially for the green spot, and just stare into space. I wondered what my father was doing right now.
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Mon Jun 15, 2009 7:44 pm

I'm back! Sorry for the wait. Chapter 2 coming tomorrow!
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:22 am

IT'S HERE!!!
Chapter 2 part 1
Soon I heard the all too familar sound of Blaze waking up in his room. I was lying on the floor, watching the ceiling fan go round and round. I went over to my telescope. Time to check the sky again. As I was about to pull it down to eye level, I gasped. I didn't need a telescope to see that. The once tiny green spot in the sky had grown to one of those stupid stains-that-you-can't-get-out in the sky. I immediatly stopped looking and reached for my cell phone in my pocket with my good arm to call the experts. It didn't move.
It didn't move. I stared.MY ARM'S NOT MOVING!!! I panicked in my mind. Outside I was calm as a rock. I tried and tried and tried and tried a gazillion times. Finally my arm touched my cell phone.
As if a bomb had been set off, a flash of bright white light blinded me for a moment in an instant. I yelped in pain. The door slammed open and Blaze came rushing in. When he saw that nothing had happened, he asked with a drop of sour disappointment, "What's the matter?" I was sitting in a corner of the room. My knees were shaking rapidly. My face had a shaken look. Once I gathered my wits, I answered, "I don't know, Blaze. I don't know."
Blaze sighed in annoyance. Then he left downstairs, leaving the door open.
I decided to stop thinking about calling.
I went downstairs and found Blaze in the kitchen on the phone. I fixed myself some breakfast. After that, I asked Blaze, "So, who were you talking to on the phone?" "Mom's at Offworld Plaza. She says something happened." Blaze answered. "Is it Dad?" I asked. He shrugged. "I don't know. But Mom told me to babysit you. And I was gonna go to my girlfriend's." "What if Dad's in trouble?" I asked. "Hope not. If he is, he might-" But I interuptted Blaze. "Stop it!" I pleaded. I didn't want to think Dad was.........
My phone rang. "Hello?" I said. "Alice, can you open the door please?" Cantara asked. "Cantara! Why did you come here?" I asked. "It's pretty obvious when you think about it." she answered. "Oh yeah." I said. " Gonna open the door now."
I opened the front door, and standing there was Cantara holding a bunch of dresses. "Hey." I said. "So," Cantara said, "you coming to the dance on Monday?" "Nope. Dances are for babies, remember?" I said. "Fine." she said. She came in and laid her dresses on the couch. " Let's see which dress is beautiful for me." Cantara said. We spent the next hour finding which dress was perfect for her.
After about eighteen dresses, there was a dark purple dress which was gorgeous against herself. Her eyes and blue hair highlighted tthe dress to make it even gorgeous-er. "It's so pretty." I said. "And I'm the one who doesn't like to wear dresses." "You think so?" Cantara beamed. I nodded.
Then there was a flash of light across the sky. I gasped. "The meteors." I whispered.
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:24 am

Any comments or questions please post.

I COULD USE THE ENCOURAGEMENT HERE PEOPLE!!


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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:33 am

Cool Story!!

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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:01 pm

Excellento! (Is that even a word?) Hehe.
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Wed Jun 24, 2009 5:43 pm

Chapter 2 part 2

I can't go out in my pajamas!I thought."Excuse me." I said as I pushed past Blaze and Cantara. I ran upstairs to change into my red button halter, my green shorts, and my green sneakers.I pushed past Blaze and Cantara again and rushed outside. There, on Foster's lawn, was a giant crater. And Mac and Bloo were staring- no, gaping- at the crater. I ran towards them."Are you OK?" I asked.Mac and Bloo. The two nodded.
Then I took my turn staring. I've seen meteor craters before, but not one THIS big. I decided to head toward it a little more. Mac and Bloo did so, too. I gasped. In the middle of the steep crater, was a greenish pod. "Eww. That looks gross." Bloo commented. "Yeah, and it smells weird, too." Mac agreed. I simply stared in silence.
Suddenly, the ground came alive. It rumbled and grumbled and mumbled and the earth shook. We stumbled on our feet. I almost fell into the crater. I shouted and quickly backed away. Then came a disgusting and horrendous sight. The pod's veins leaked a sickly green goo. When the goo finished leaking out, it took the shape of teardrops.
I wanted to throw up.
The goo teardrops came to life. Vicious, flesh-hungry faces were painted on them. And this came to be known as Fusion Spawns.
At first, the monsters only wanted to protect their precious little pod. They circled the pod ( Terrafuser ). But then they spotted us. They rapidly ran at us like bulls to a red flag. "Get to the back of the house. " I whispered to Mac and Bloo. Mac ran, dragging Bloo. "Awww, but I wantta see!" Bloo whined. I chuckled under my breath.
Then I picked up the nearest weapon. It was a shard of glass. It had a greenish glow to it and had a single light green vein running through it. I didn't care as long it was a good weapon. I stood my ground and pointed the shard toward the Spawns. "OK, whoever comes one step foward shall recieve a killing from THIS." I warned them. They didn't care. They ran towards me. I panicked. I waved my shard of glass furiously.
Man, were they easy to kill!
After I destroyed the last one, I sighed a sigh of relief. But I sighed too soon. The pools of the green goo quickly changed back into Fusion Spawns. "Uh oh." I said. Soon, the cavalry came. Blaze and Cantara ( still in her dress ) came rushing in. "I can't fight in a dress!" Cantara exclaimed. "Well, you better learn how to." Blaze snapped. He was carrying a baseball bat, while Cantara only brought herself.
"Help!" I said. Blaze knocked the Spawns out of my way, while Cantara was doing the kung fu kick on the creatures trying to track down Mac and Bloo.
It was several hours long, the battle. It seemed hopeless. The Fusion Spawns were just dying and living. Living and dying. Dying and living. Then I thought of the shard of glass I used as a sword.
My sword was glowy. Glowy stuff always do what you think they're supposed to do. I knew what I had to do. I carefully gripped the glass tight and ran for the Terrafuser. "AAAHH!" I screamed as I made my way through the sea of Fusion Spawns and to the Terrafuser. Under my own intentions, I was supposed to just pierce the Terrafuser. But as I attacked it, I didn't know I was accidentally going through the Terrafuser.
Oh, it hurt so much!
I was lying on the ground, paralyzed by the pain. It was a pain so great, it had the potential to kill. I was thinking, Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh. Just get it over with. I want to die soonly and quickly as possible. But I didn't. I just stood there, yelling in pain.


"AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!"
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Wed Jun 24, 2009 5:44 pm

Shocked

What will happen next?
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Wed Jun 24, 2009 8:34 pm

Cantara's a male, a dude...

A soldier in his own army, out in the Wilds...

I didn't get asked for permission to be put in this story...

is the Cantara in this story, Cantara Crowfalcon, my character?

Who's real name is Samuel Millston?
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:50 pm

Again, I'm talking about CANTARA AEROAIR, DUDE!!!

Plus, I thought Cantara was a girl's name since it ended with an A.
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:05 pm

What about Porkchopa?

Cantara isn't a real name...
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Thu Jun 25, 2009 6:05 pm

lol! Porkchopa!!???? Ok, back to the story.
Chapter 2 part 3

I woke up. Was it all a dream? Was it all, truly, really, just, a dream? I hoped so. Then I realized I was in a crib. In a fortress. How weird and funny is that? I erupted in amusing laughter. Since I was too big for the crib, I put my leg over the crib wall and tried to just knock it over. When I raised my leg over, the crib fell over along with me. "Ouch." I said. I stood up and cleaned up the crib wreckage. Except I didn't have time because the door opened. By then it was too late to realize the door was dungeon style. I quickly tried to hide myself under the wreckage.
The person coming in looked weird. It stepped inside to inspect. I gasped, quietly. The person wasn't a person, it was a one of those Fusion Spawn monsters. But this creature looked more advanced and complex than a Fusion Spawn. Instead of a simple teardrop shape only, it had a full body with limbs and crimson eyes, with a detailed face. It even had hair! The monster looked suspiciously at the crib wreck. It stood there, glaring at the mess. I swore to myself it would kill me in a messy and painful way if I even took a breath. There was a moment of dreadful silence.
After a while, it left and slammed the dungeon like door closed. I deeply sighed. "Whew!" I said. "What is this place?" There was an open window nearby. I looked out and saw a desert. Well, it wasn't like a desert. It was more of an... an...endless ocean. There was an endless ocean of green stuff beyond the fortress outposts. I gagged and tried not to throw up. I was sick of seeing green now. I looked down on my green shorts and sneakers and threw up out the window.
Suddenly, there was shouting behind the door. I quickly looked for a way out besides the obvious and painful way out. Somewhere along my thinking, I tripped and fell in a deep dark hole.
I found out the hole wasn't a hole; it was a tunnel. I fell my way through the tunnel until I hit an almost-dead-end. I lit up a lighter from my shorts pocket and put the flame on a twig I found earlier yesterday to make the torch. I walked my way through and screamed.
I was falling.......again. I stopped when i hit the floor. Then I spotted them. More creatures. They glared at me. I stared at them. They chased. I screamed in frustration.
I ran and ran and ran and ran and ran. I wanted them to stop chasing me. I was certain this was just a dream. I was so sure. "Wake up, Alice!" I said to myself. "Wake up!Wake up Alice! Wake up!"

"Wake Up, Alice!"
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PostSubject: Re: The Diaries of Alice by Forestgur   Fri Jun 26, 2009 1:35 pm

For some reason I want this story to be NZeroed....

NZero! Where are you??? Can you review this story? Here's some chicken and cheese to help lure you in....

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